artist:adachi bad-poopies blood dancie-babbeh dismemberment explicit fire fleeing foal-abuse shit torch

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Feyascia: It was promising till the owner went full 'tard. Personally, I'm mostly over disproportionate response.

Still, nice art.

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deathproofpony: This is spectacular, but recommend resizing it a bit smaller.
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Anonymous1: Love it! Can't wait for the next one

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RQ: Manually ripping fluffies apart is so satisfying.
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Anonymous2: This escalated quickly.
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Anonymous3: Excellent work sir
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PeppermintParchment: I laughed at "Infinite white space"!

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Adachi: @deathproofpony: Holy shit I didn't realize how huge this was until I uploaded. Sorry guys.

@Feyascia: The basis for this story is that the human girl here has a very short temper. Short temper =/= quick deaths though!

Anyway, needless to say, first upload after lurking for a few months. I'll start on the next one later today, thanks for the comments!

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Adachi: @PeppermintParchment: Haha, some may say it's an excuse not to color and draw a proper background but I don't see it that way!
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Anonymous4: Dam those shot rats for turning white space brown
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FoalOut4: @Anonymous: shot rats? are they used for pouring alcohol into now?
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Twistee: God I love that recurring joke of Fluffies fouling a pristine white void. There's just something so amusing about Fluffies existing in a pocket of perfected cleanliness for the sole purpose of dirtying it and pissing off the owner of the void.

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Adachi: @Twistee: Couldn't have said it better myself. I also love-hate anytime a foal cries "am just witto babbeh"--extremely rage-inducing for me but so satisfying to see a foal who uses that as an excuse to misbehave get hurt.
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FoalOut4: @Adachi: "babbeh nee miwkies!" can be an annoying phrase as well, especially if the foal is having a temper tantrum over not getting enough miwkies, or is just demanding it.

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Adachi: @FoalOut4: I agree, but to be honest I find that in general any time a foal demands anything makes me rage.

Fuck, why do I like this shit?

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Guzziman: @Feyascia: Nah d00d you gotta keep that precious, pristine white void from having any color.

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Feyascia: @Guzziman: You have a point. First a foal poops on the floor, then immigrants take our jobs, then the blacks move in. Shit keeps rolling downhill.
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Anonymous5: Meh, plot suck. Remake with actually good plot?

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deathproofpony: @Adachi: One of us... one of us... gooba gobba...

Seriously, though - you do great work. Always nice to see a new artist here. Hope to see more from you.
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Anonymous6: I would ask make the panel reading-order consistent, especially if its gigantic like this one.

Also, no one gonna say anything about the one little fucker stomping on the dookie? Nothing?

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Adachi: @deathproofpony: Thanks, hope to make something worth a read at least.

@Anonymous: I agree, not much of a plot because it's meant to serve as an introduction. To be honest, I dove to this without any sort of plan and just took it wherever it went; fucking around I suppose. We shall see if it turns into something better, but I'm open to all sort of criticism.

@Anonymous: This was originally meant to have only 5 panels, but I kept adding on (hence the numbering at the bottom corners).

His intent was to "clean" up his brother's mess. Of course, fluffies are complete imbeciles so it didn't turn out exactly as expected--I left any details out for a reason, as I hope to incorporate it into the next part.
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Anonymous7: Why'sa she killing babys? Wtf?
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Anonymous8: @Adachi: the panel numbers were helpful, once i saw those, I figured it out.

Fuckinh dook-stomper had me laughing, doe. Just like... what...what?

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JellyBellenheimer: @Anonymous: because their oblivious shitty nature, and the fact that they are even more childish and fucking stupid than an adult fluffy makes these faggots even more grindable and tearable.... *pitches abuse pants tent while licking lips*
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cottony: Nice
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cottony: @Anonymous: Welcome to the booru.
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Anonymous9: so bright i can bearley see
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Maxell: So when's the second part coming out?
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Anonymous10: nice ! moarrrr pain and torture

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Adachi: @Maxell: Who knows! I suck, and I got caught up with school last semester for several weeks/months. Hell, look how long it's taken me to reply! By the time I had some extra time and I drew a couple of extra panels, I forgot most of my ideas and felt like it was going nowhere. I could probably pick it up some time in the future, but that's uncertain.

Anyway, I have some other new stuff in mind and some time, so a couple of panels are finished. I feel like I can get something up an running. Unsure if it's any good, but fuck it, I'm posting it and hope to actually stick with it this time.
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Anonymous11: Great ! continue !!!
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Anonymous12(11): "witto babbeh?" no! "witto bio-crap"!!
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Anonymous13: @Adachi: did you copy the moving hair from somewhere?
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