Image Uploader Adachi, May 26, 2016; 11:14 Tags artist:adachi bad-poopies blood dancie-babbeh dismemberment fire fleeing foal-abuse shit torch Rating explicit Source Unknown Locked No Comments May 26, 2016; 12:03 - Reply Feyascia: It was promising till the owner went full 'tard. Personally, I'm mostly over disproportionate response. Still, nice art. May 26, 2016; 12:06 - Reply deathproofpony: This is spectacular, but recommend resizing it a bit smaller. May 26, 2016; 12:06 - Reply Anonymous1: Love it! Can't wait for the next one May 26, 2016; 12:07 - Reply RQ: Manually ripping fluffies apart is so satisfying. May 26, 2016; 12:09 - Reply Anonymous2: This escalated quickly. May 26, 2016; 12:11 - Reply Anonymous3: Excellent work sir May 26, 2016; 12:15 - Reply PeppermintParchment: I laughed at "Infinite white space"! May 26, 2016; 12:27 - Reply Adachi: @deathproofpony: Holy shit I didn't realize how huge this was until I uploaded. Sorry guys. @Feyascia: The basis for this story is that the human girl here has a very short temper. Short temper =/= quick deaths though! Anyway, needless to say, first upload after lurking for a few months. I'll start on the next one later today, thanks for the comments! May 26, 2016; 12:35 - Reply Adachi: @PeppermintParchment: Haha, some may say it's an excuse not to color and draw a proper background but I don't see it that way! May 26, 2016; 12:41 - Reply Anonymous4: Dam those shot rats for turning white space brown May 26, 2016; 12:46 - Reply FoalOut4: @Anonymous: shot rats? are they used for pouring alcohol into now? May 26, 2016; 12:57 - Reply Twistee: God I love that recurring joke of Fluffies fouling a pristine white void. There's just something so amusing about Fluffies existing in a pocket of perfected cleanliness for the sole purpose of dirtying it and pissing off the owner of the void. May 26, 2016; 13:21 - Reply Adachi: @Twistee: Couldn't have said it better myself. I also love-hate anytime a foal cries "am just witto babbeh"--extremely rage-inducing for me but so satisfying to see a foal who uses that as an excuse to misbehave get hurt. May 26, 2016; 13:37 - Reply FoalOut4: @Adachi: "babbeh nee miwkies!" can be an annoying phrase as well, especially if the foal is having a temper tantrum over not getting enough miwkies, or is just demanding it. May 26, 2016; 13:45 - Reply Adachi: @FoalOut4: I agree, but to be honest I find that in general any time a foal demands anything makes me rage. Fuck, why do I like this shit? May 26, 2016; 13:46 - Reply Guzziman: @Feyascia: Nah d00d you gotta keep that precious, pristine white void from having any color. May 26, 2016; 15:01 - Reply Feyascia: @Guzziman: You have a point. First a foal poops on the floor, then immigrants take our jobs, then the blacks move in. Shit keeps rolling downhill. May 26, 2016; 15:57 - Reply Anonymous5: Meh, plot suck. Remake with actually good plot? May 26, 2016; 16:02 - Reply deathproofpony: @Adachi: One of us... one of us... gooba gobba... Seriously, though - you do great work. Always nice to see a new artist here. Hope to see more from you. May 26, 2016; 18:34 - Reply Anonymous6: I would ask make the panel reading-order consistent, especially if its gigantic like this one. Also, no one gonna say anything about the one little fucker stomping on the dookie? Nothing? May 26, 2016; 19:28 - Reply Adachi: @deathproofpony: Thanks, hope to make something worth a read at least. @Anonymous: I agree, not much of a plot because it's meant to serve as an introduction. To be honest, I dove to this without any sort of plan and just took it wherever it went; fucking around I suppose. We shall see if it turns into something better, but I'm open to all sort of criticism. @Anonymous: This was originally meant to have only 5 panels, but I kept adding on (hence the numbering at the bottom corners). His intent was to "clean" up his brother's mess. Of course, fluffies are complete imbeciles so it didn't turn out exactly as expected--I left any details out for a reason, as I hope to incorporate it into the next part. May 26, 2016; 20:15 - Reply Anonymous7: Why'sa she killing babys? Wtf? May 26, 2016; 21:21 - Reply Anonymous8: @Adachi: the panel numbers were helpful, once i saw those, I figured it out. Fuckinh dook-stomper had me laughing, doe. Just like... what...what? May 27, 2016; 01:55 - Reply JellyBellenheimer: @Anonymous: because their oblivious shitty nature, and the fact that they are even more childish and fucking stupid than an adult fluffy makes these faggots even more grindable and tearable.... *pitches abuse pants tent while licking lips* May 27, 2016; 18:14 - Reply cottony: Nice May 27, 2016; 18:14 - Reply cottony: @Anonymous: Welcome to the booru. May 29, 2016; 11:24 - Reply Anonymous9: so bright i can bearley see August 7, 2016; 08:06 - Reply Maxell: So when's the second part coming out? August 12, 2016; 23:27 - Reply Anonymous10: nice ! moarrrr pain and torture November 30, 2016; 19:06 - Reply Adachi: @Maxell: Who knows! I suck, and I got caught up with school last semester for several weeks/months. Hell, look how long it's taken me to reply! By the time I had some extra time and I drew a couple of extra panels, I forgot most of my ideas and felt like it was going nowhere. I could probably pick it up some time in the future, but that's uncertain. Anyway, I have some other new stuff in mind and some time, so a couple of panels are finished. I feel like I can get something up an running. Unsure if it's any good, but fuck it, I'm posting it and hope to actually stick with it this time. December 1, 2016; 09:13 - Reply Anonymous11: Great ! continue !!! December 1, 2016; 09:21 - Reply Anonymous12(11): "witto babbeh?" no! "witto bio-crap"!! December 1, 2016; 17:01 - Reply Anonymous13: @Adachi: did you copy the moving hair from somewhere? Thread locked for the current user.