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'night bus'
by natback666

'it a terrible thing inside,
when your natural high has died
the weaker turn to dope
& put all aside their hope'
--curtis mayfield

jules stares at the crackhead near the bus door, holding a struggling fluffy by its tail.

'this is cypress,' the driver intones.

the doors open. the crackhead jumps out; other vacating passengers move around him. 'b-b-babylon fallin!' the crackhead roars, brandishing the sobbing fluffy, 'de wicked one drop!'

'nuuuuuu! wet smawty daaown!' the creature screams.

it defecates over the crackhead. he doesnt seem to notice, flinging the fluffy down. jules hears the creatures bones snap; it wails once. the crackhead stumbles over it, crushing it.

jules watches the fluffys shattered remains as the bus departs cypress.

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natback666: halfway point ya fuckin cunts; mad love to all of you bitches for the endless, unconditional support & encouragement LOL

regards niggas,
natback666 <333
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Anonymous1: End this.
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Anonymous2: Hello. I am a 15 year old Rhinoceros. The only problem is that my horn on my head is soft and limp. As you may know this is very devastating to a rhino like myself. If there are any rhinos out there that can help me with my problem it would be appreciated. Please dont copy paste this. This is my story.
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Anonymous3: REMOVE KEBAB remove kebab you are worst turk. you are the turk idiot you are the turk smell. return to croatioa. to our croatia cousins you may come our contry. you may live in the zoo….ahahahaha ,bosnia we will never forgeve you. cetnik rascal FUck but fuck asshole turk stink bosnia sqhipere shqipare..turk genocide best day of my life. take a bath of dead turk..ahahahahahBOSNIA WE WILL GET YOU!! do not forget ww2 .albiania we kill the king , albania return to your precious mongolia….hahahahaha idiot turk and bosnian smell so bad..wow i can smell it. REMOVE KEBAB FROM THE PREMISES. you will get caught. russia+usa+croatia+slovak=kill bosnia…you will ww2/ tupac alive in serbia, tupac making album of serbia . fast rap tupac serbia. we are rich and have gold now hahahaha ha because of tupac… you are ppoor stink turk… you live in a hovel hahahaha, you live in a yurt tupac alive numbr one #1 in serbia ….fuck the croatia ,..FUCKk ashol turks no good i spit´╗┐ in the mouth eye of ur flag and contry. 2pac aliv and real strong wizard kill all the turk farm aminal with rap magic now we the serba rule .ape of the zoo presidant georg bush fukc the great satan and lay egg this egg hatch and bosnia wa;s born. stupid baby form the eggn give bak our clay we will crush u lik a skull of pig. serbia greattst countrey
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Anonymous4: reminds me of NY back in the mid 80s.
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Anonymous5: The story was a shitpost, the comments are shitposting intensified.We have actually managed to square the shitpost.

We have achieved Shitposted Squared. God Help Us.
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Anonymous6: @Anonymous: we need to go deeper
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Anonymous7: @natback666: you sound like a cuck