abuse artist:deathcap author:I_hate_pod_six chemicals foal foal-abuse foal-dies lawn-invasion mspaint mummah overkill stupidity

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Deathcap: First attempt at abuse art. Well, I tried doing a little 'visualization' once, but it's best we don't speak of it. Any criticism is welcomed.

Melt-A-Fluff taken from I_hate_pod_six, so I put their name as the author. It was a meant to be overkill in their AGENT BLACK series (worth checking out, always good to read about the culling of a megaherd), so I had MC water it down.
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Anonymous1: The art is crap, but love the concept. Keep it up and refine your technique. You could be a Wolfram_Sparks in the making if you do.
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Anonymous2: Word of advice for ms paint:
DON'T use the circle tool (or any shape tool for that matter)
i mean NEVER it looks unnatural and jarring
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Anonymous3(2): @Anonymous: The lines tool is okay in moderation but don't use it for living beings (fluffies people animals)

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favelour: @Anonymous: frankly I don't really mind it, it makes it feel more mspainty
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Anonymous4: Are you using the circle and square tool dont use it because it doesn't make you improve at all
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Anonymous5: I mean, it's fine, a little... mspaint-y? Idk. But content is content.

And I don't know why you're getting so much shit, people have submitted far worse in the past.
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Anonymous6(5): @Anonymous: Actually, I redact that. I didn't see the 'any criticism is welcomed' bit.

Have you considered drawing? Or perhaps any form of media that isn't mspaint?

Also, I'd chill with the shapes and just use the freehand stuff if you plan to stick with it.
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I_hate_pod_six: Neat to see Melt-A-Fluff making an appearance!
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Anonymous7(5): when you realize last second that you can't rotate shapes at a 45 degree angle so you settle for motion lines
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Anonymous8: A+
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Anonymous9: I like it. Would really appreciate a "page 2"/follow-up/conclusion. Not looking for a MS Paint masterpiece, just a quick couple of panels showing what happens to the other foal. Spray it up the pooper? Wait until the mare embraces her bestes babbeh then fuse them together with the spray? Mummah goes to give huggies to the red foal only to be burned by the caustic residue, sorry hoofsies ensue? Don't care how it goes down, just want see how it unfolds from here.

tl;dr Good Job