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Much Worse (pt 5)
by Dont Ask

>you are Lemon

>your daddeh left you all by yourself for many forevers, so you got your revenge

>you made sorry-poopies all over the room he left you in, hope it teaches him a lesson

>hes back now, and put you back in the bad-beddie-cagie, its so small you cant even breath right!

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>you are anon

>you put Lemon in the cage, and started to work on the safe-box

>its a tiny cardboard box, an even smaller litterbox (it costed 50$ cause its self changing), and a hamster feeder for water

>once you're done putting it all together, you walk into the bathroom where Lemon is

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>you are Lemon, you deeply regret giving sorry-poopies to daddehs housie, now you're stuck in a tiny cage

creeeeeeek

>the door opens. Daddehs back!

“DADDEH!”

“WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT YELLING BEFORE I SAY YOU CAN?!”

“sor-

>daddeh than picks yoi up by the scruff

“NUU!! NU BAD UPSIES!!” SCREEEEEE!!

>he puts you in a box, no bed, no food, and its so dark!

>you're so hungry, and all you can do is lay on the cold hard cardboard and cry yourself to sleep

>the next morning you wake up, ready to be free, but daddeh wont come save you! Hes left you! And you dont wanna be in any more trouble so you just wait it all out





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guodzilla: Um...
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GewawtofWivia: Ahhhh man ive gotta say, if you take some time to put the parts together in text pad or word, and just put more effort into editing and meaningful exposition you might have something pretty good. As is, its not great. But you can do better if you try.

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MONEJO: Great history... i like the way it turns... but is getting slow...
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PlzAnon8: its good, but make it longer

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dont_ask: @PlzAnon8:
i cant, the writing program i use only lets me make it so long.