Image Uploader PaperCuts, June 11, 2018; 09:19 Tags Artist:PaperCuts Author:Papercuts Delilah's-dominance delilah Rating Source Unknown Locked No Comments June 11, 2018; 11:07 - Reply PaperCuts: this is gonna be a comic for now, but if nobody likes my style ill go to writing. also im bad at writing June 11, 2018; 12:10 - Reply ElCuCuyfeo: This is evident. June 11, 2018; 14:31 - Reply deadweight: I have seen far, far, FAAAAAAAR worse, keep it up June 12, 2018; 01:01 - Reply sugarnacid: Dem perfectly round circles. June 12, 2018; 04:28 - Reply keratin: Well, since it's your first, I'll be honest... Idk what the fuck did the subtitles says, Like... first of all! Green text on green background, dude just use text border. Secondly, use coherent sentences on the narration would ya? You writes like 14 year old. June 12, 2018; 20:25 - Reply PaperCuts: @keratin: woodja rather me make the whole thing writin? June 12, 2018; 22:10 - Reply Sacred: Keep drawing! It helps for practice a lot! You only need to change the subtitle colors or add them an outline. Thread locked for the current user.